my sister wrote this poem! http://countingstars-cid.deviantart.com/art/Moon-on-my-Shoes-148933409
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oh i read it and it was really good 8D
omg creativity runs in the family!!!!
wow she has a gift!!
i dun get the poem D8

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wow thats crazy. i have a bunch of friends in da poetry club at my college n i sat thru a meeting 1 day n they kinda inspired me 2 start writting sum myself..or try to anyway..
n its actually a LOT harder than jus rhyming words n shxt.
lik i get bits n pieces of wut cud b a rly good poem; lik a phrase or a thought but i can never carry it out n go alla way wit it...
lik i c how difficult it is now u kno. thats rly cool that she or any poet actually can come up with stuff lik this...
my fav part was the ending where she heard it wrong or wutevers..
:) i rly likkkd